My Bird(My Gonza - a flower bud)
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be the huge river,
So that she drink endlessly,
So that she quenches all her thirst,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be the tree,
So that she can rest forever,
So that she can sleep undisturbed,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be the air,
Pure, warm and cool,
So that she can breathe deeper and deeper,
So that I don’t miss her
even during the rise & fall of each second,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be the breeze,
So that she can relax,
So that her warmth is first felt in me,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be the sea of emotions,
So that she can share,
Share the flood of joy,
Shed the season of blues,
So that she can glow,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be the spring,
So that she can bloom as a flower bud,
So that she can enjoy surprises,
Promises of the nature,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
I want to be her all skies,
So that she get lost in myself,
So that I get lost in herself,
So that we get lost in both of us,
I want to be merged in herself,
She is a free bird,
And I want to be her sky;
: - RAVINDER SINGH
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18 comments:
Subhan-allah!!! [:)].....well I can only think of these words.....
Nice, sweet and cute composition.....
Way to go....'Agar aagaz yeh hai to anjaam kya hoga!!!!'
o praji tussi gr8 ho
apki mohabbat ka kayal ho gaya hu
apki shayari pe ghayal ho gaya hu
proud to be one of your best pal
I share things I have and will continue doing so. What i share are the reflections of our lives, they will be merged here exactly in ways we felt those!
Brother ur creation "My Bird" is really too great and romantic.
Ur thought reflects that u r in Great love with somebody . keep writing such poems , they will make ur love more stronger and pure.....Keep it up.
hanji .... guru ..
great job done by you......
keep it up.. dude.......
our gang rocks..........
enjoy and missing u all ......
Thanks to be mine friend
Ravinder its really emotional what have you have written..i done have words to say..but this poem is really nice and beautiful.....keep up this spirit..:)
Hope you will find your free bird very soon..
enjoy ur life and keep on writing such a lovely poems for all of us..no doubt u r a talented person and experienced too :-P
enzoiiiiiiiii ur lifffffeeeeeeee.
Amazzzing...Bosss...Keep it up...:)
Ravinder,the words u have used in poem are tuely touching n emotional.
i m speechless. i hope u will find ur bird soon infact very soon.
specially ur creation "How life has changed"is superb.i liked it the most
it reminded me my past days..its really amazing.
keep it up..
Ashima
its really gud n now ur free bird is wth u...........to ab itni der kun laga re ho jaldi se ye unhe sunao
nd i m waiting 4 sm gud poem of urs on our friendship.......nd keep writing.garima
There are many languages to express yourself and show your feelings but the most effective and powerful way is of course the world of poem/shayaris.
U know Ravi..Beauty of words make your feelings more beautiful and meaningful.
Just for u...
hain duniya mein shayar bhee bohot achche aur
magr hum kehte hain ki Ravi ka hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur
I have posted so many...comments bt hw will u reconize..those r by me...rashmi
There are many languages to express yourself and show your feelings but the most effective and powerful way is of course the world of poem/shayaris.
U know Ravi..Beauty of words make your feelings more beautiful and meaningful.
Just for u...
hain duniya mein shayar bhee bohot achche aur
magr hum kehte hain ki Ravi ka hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur
Rashmi
This is simply awesome...
I am proud of you my dear... :)
Nice poem Dost.
It is reflection of your love and life
Very Lovely poem veer ji ... I too try to write few words but not awsome like you.
Today when sun rise, my heart start cries
I spend my whole night watching you in a star
I gone frustrate why you are so far
My heart is blank and inside very dark
Please come and fill it with your spark
I am desperate and I am missing
I know you are arround and teasing
1 day I will fly & meet you somewhere in the sky
Now I can feel you and touch you too
Ohhh my dear I love you and just you
Really nyccc...u hv got a long way to go..appreciate the choice of words..keep writng..n make her feel happy..dis is d best thing to happen in d whole world..
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